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You are planning a two-week vacation and need someone to take care of your pet while you are away. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter -Tell your cousin that you are going on a vacation -Ask your cousin to take care of your pet for you -Explain what tasks you would like your cousin to do

Dear cousin I am going
to
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on
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two
Correct determiner usage
a
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week
Use the right word
two-week
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 vacation. I request
you
Correct word choice
that you
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 care
of
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for
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 my pet. It is
white
Correct article usage
a white
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cat
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. It is
name
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named
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 Mia. You are my
cat
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every
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on every
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 weekend stroll. It is
eat
Wrong verb form
eating
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 special food.
For instance
Linking Words
:
cat
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 meal, fish,
meat
Correct word choice
and meat
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.
In
Linking Words
addition
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addition,
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 it is love chips. Every day you are
prepare
Wrong verb form
preparing
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 these meals. Especially, you are
buy
Wrong verb form
buying
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 special cooked fish,
it
Correct pronoun usage
which
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 is very
glad
Correct word choice
good
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. You are
go
Wrong verb form
going to
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 my
cat
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vetenarian
Correct your spelling
veterinarian
 doctor.
Vetenarian
Correct your spelling
Veterinarian
 doctor always
cure
Correct subject-verb agreement
cures
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 my
cat
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. Mia
is have
Verb problem
apply
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often
flue
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flu
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. You have it
is
Verb problem
apply
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well
care
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cared
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.
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for.
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 Twice a week it is
wishes
Fix the agreement mistake
a wish
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. If you
are
Verb problem
take
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 good care
my
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of my
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cat
Use synonyms
, I am very happy. Best wishes
Sabina
Punctuation problem
, Sabina
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.

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task
Be clear on dates and duties. Say when you go, how long you are away, and what you want done each day.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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