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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps compare an
island
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 before and after the construction of several tourist amenities.
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, the
island
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 was transformed from a natural area into a developed tourist destination, with the addition of accommodation, public facilities and transport infrastructure,
while
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 most natural features were preserved. In the west of the
island
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, a swimming area was created and connected to several accommodation huts and the reception area by footpaths, which
also
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 linked the huts to each other. In the east of the
island
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, a number of huts were built and connected to each other by footpaths. Between the two accommodation areas, a reception was constructed, with a restaurant located to the north of it.
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, a pier was added
in
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on
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 the south coast of the
island
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, allowing boats to reach the
island
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, and a vehicle track linked it to the reception and restaurant. Despite these changes, the original woodlands were not affected.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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