some people claim that not enough of waste from home is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Recycling
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day-to-day
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waste
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materials could be tricky, as some people believe that the government should
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enact
few
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a few
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laws to improve recycling.
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there are certain regulations on reused
waste
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, the authorities could implement additional
law
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laws
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or fines to bring awareness to
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apply
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waste
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management.
Firstly
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,
community
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the community
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should
distingush
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distinguish
between
waste
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and
resued
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reused
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materials to improve.
Due to
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lack
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a lack
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of knowledge in
this
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area
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many people discharge all the
waste
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into dustbins without
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separating
.
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,
government
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the government
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has to
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scrutinise
the discharge materials and implement
strick
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strict
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laws
by
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fines and community services for the
unfollowed
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non-compliant
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ones.
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, authorities can install a camera
to
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the
waste
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collecting trucks to
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monitor
, and collect fines from the
indivduals
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individuals
not following the regulations.
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, the governing bodies should not only implement strict laws,
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but it
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it
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they
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could
start
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some awareness programs for
recyling
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recycling
. So that communities can follow
on
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up on
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how to improve.
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, in Germany
goverment
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government
pay
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pays
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money for
the recycle
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recycling
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plastic bottles through
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a seperate
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seperate
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separate
machine.
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, in many developed cities there are
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separate
bin
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bins
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for
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, recycling products and medical
waste
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.
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, inculcating it as
daily
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a daily
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process
it
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apply
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could increase recycling enough
waste
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from
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the surroundings
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.
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inconclusion
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conclusion
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, to
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separate
the
waste
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from reusables, authorities
has
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have
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to bring certain rules and regulations to improve the process.
Furthermore
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, some
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programmes
could help communities to follow it daily
and
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, and
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for that the
goverment
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government
can award people for following.

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content
Give clear examples that fit the point you make and keep them simple.
language
Fix spell and use easy words that most people know.
structure
Keep ideas in one part and use easy link words like first, also, then, finally.
content
You have a real idea of how laws can push people to recycle.
examples
You use some real examples, like cameras on trucks and bottle rules in Germany.
effort
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Your opinion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • waste management
  • legal requirement
  • environmental impact
  • household waste
  • financial incentives
  • penalties
  • guidelines
  • awareness campaigns
  • community-led initiatives
  • corporate responsibility
  • sustainability
  • compliance
  • culture of recycling
  • landfill
  • educational initiatives
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