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Band 6.5

The graph shows oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010

The given bar chart illustrates the
amount
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 of
oil
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 production among 6 different countries over a
period
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 of 20 years, starting from 1990.
Overall
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, the
amount
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 of
oil
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producation
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production
 for
Saudia
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Saudi
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 Arabia was the highest compared to other nations over the
period
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,
while
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 the figures for Qatar
was
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were
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minor
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of minor
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 significance. At the beginning of the
period
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, the
amount
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 of
oil
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 production in
SAudi
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Saudi
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 Arabia was over 8
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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barrelers
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barrels
, and it
contiued
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continued
 to increase to
finsh
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finish
 above 14
millions
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million
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barralers
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barrels
 in 2010. In sharp contrast to
this
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,
this
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 number for Qatar was very
afew
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few
, and it levelled off over the
period
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, apart from a brief rise in 2000. Turning to other communities, the
amount
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 of manufacturing of
oil
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 for Iran, Iraq, and
Kuaite
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Kuwait
,
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apply
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 went up over the
period
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and
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, and
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 they finished just over 4, under 4, and well below 4, respectively.
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, there was a steady
tren
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trend
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 for UAE from 1990 to 2005, and it reached the peak at over 3
millions
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million
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baralles
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barrels
 in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, oil, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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