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Communication through text messaging and other instant of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been observed that communicating via social media
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 to short and simple texts. Some individuals argue that
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 will result in more mistakes in
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 and spelling. I truly agree with the given statement, because short text may be misunderstood and lack emotional expressions.
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, text messaging encourages
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 to write quickly rather than correctly. Many users ignore
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 rules and spelling in order to save time.
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,
people
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 often use shortened words, slang, or incorrect punctuation when chatting online. If
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 habit continues for a long time, especially among young
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, they may forget how to write properly in formal situations
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 as exams, school assignments, or work emails.
Secondly
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, short and basic
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 often lack clarity and emotional expression. In traditional communication, tone of voice and body language help
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 understand the message clearly.
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, in text
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, these elements are missing.
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,
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 can be misunderstood, which may lead to confusion or even arguments.
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 shows that correct
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 and clear sentence structure are still very important in communication. In conclusion, I agree that the increasing use of short online
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 can harm
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 and spelling skills.
Although
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 online communication is fast and convenient,
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 should make an effort to use proper language to avoid misunderstandings and protect their writing abilities.

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task response
Say your view at the start and keep it in all the body parts. Give a clear reason for your view.
task response
Add one more simple example from real life to back your point.
coherence
Use small links like also, but, then, so. Make each paragraph have one main idea.
content
Clear view on the issue.
structure
Good plan with start, middle, and end.
coherence
Use of order words like First/Second.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • text
  • message
  • online
  • chat
  • write
  • read
  • grammar
  • spelling
  • rule
  • form
  • short form
  • full form
  • formal
  • informal
  • error
  • mistake
  • fix
  • school
  • exam
  • practice
  • habit
  • tool
  • correct
  • change
  • future
  • life
  • work
  • clear
  • easy
  • good
  • bad
  • better
  • discuss
  • idea
  • age
  • group
  • use
  • there
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