You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight Explain how missing your flight affected you Make it clear what you would like the airline to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to formally inform you that I missed my connecting
flight
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from Germany to Vancouver with your airline on December 31
due to
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technical issues at Frankfurt airport. My first
flight
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from Delhi reached the airport on time.
However
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, there was a long delay at the security check because the screens were out of order
due to
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some technical problems.
Consequently
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, officials were conducting manual checks, which took a lot of time. After clearing security check, when I reached gate F, boarding had already been closed
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the aeroplane was about to take off. Missing my
flight
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caused me significant
incovenience
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inconvenience
. As I was on a business trip,
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I missed an important client meeting.
Moreover
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, I had to book another
flight
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which was
extermely
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extremely
expensive. I would appreciate it if you could take immediate action on
this
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matter. I kindly request you to issue me a refund for my ticket and provide compensation for all
mental
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stress I have gone through. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sukriti Kundal

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task response
Be clear on what you want. State refund and compensation in one clear line and next lines give details.
coherence
Make the letter in three easy parts: part 1 is what happened, part 2 is how it hit you, part 3 is what you ask for. Use links so the text fits as one flow.
content
You tell what happened and how it hit your work.
format
You use a polite, formal tone with a proper greeting and closing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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