You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the house •describe how you are spending your time there •invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

Dear Rohan, I hope you are doing fine. I am delighted to let you know about the rental house by a lake that I recently booked for my summer vacation. Well,

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house is so spacious with a charming garden. The interior of

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house is elegantly decorated with a blend of traditional

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and contemporary styles, which makes the place feel so warm and lively.

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, we have three bedrooms, and one of the bedrooms has a balcony facing the lake view, which is particularly beautiful. I am spending my evening engaging in activities held at the lake by the local community , like boating or fishing. During the day, I spend most of my time exploring the nearby places

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as restaurants, art galleries, and museums.

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place has captivated my interest because of the picturesque views. I would love to invite you to come over for your vacation to spend some quality time here. I hope that will give you a real break from your hectic schedule. Please let me know as soon as possible. See you soon. Take care. Best regards, Jeevitha S

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Jan 3, 2026

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task

The letter covers all parts: a house description, how you spend time, and an invite.

coherence

Some ideas are in one paragraph. Try to keep one clear idea in each paragraph.

coherence

Use simple links like 'and', 'also', 'but', to show ideas flow.

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Fix small grammar and punctuation errors for a smoother read.

task response

Shows a clear plan: house, time, and invite.

coherence

Good tone and friendly feel.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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