You recently moved to a new city and want to join a public library. Write a letter to the library manager. In your letter: explain why you want to join the library ask about membership fees and opening hours inquire whether the library provides online resources or study rooms

Hello Sir/Mam, I am writing

this

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letter to express my desire to get a membership in

George

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the George

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Library

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. I recently moved to London to

persue

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pursue

post graduation

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post-graduation

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Oxford University in Marketing. I'm

currenlty

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currently

staying in

shared

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a shared

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appartment

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apartment

because of which I was looking for a good

study

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environment

and

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, and

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one of my

friend

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suggested

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apply

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about

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apply

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this

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library

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. I would love

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it if

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you could give me more information about different

type

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types

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of membership and their fees, as I will be a

fulltime

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full-time

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student and planning to find a

part time

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part-time

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job

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their

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will be specific days of

week

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the week

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when I can be able to use

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Library

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the Library

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for studying.

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, I was curious to ask if I can get

acsess

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access

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online

study

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resources

along with

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membership

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membership,

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as it would be easy for me to read

while

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I'm travelling

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Additionaly

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Additionally

, I want to know if

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Library

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the Library

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have separate

study

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rooms which can be used if someone wants to

study

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privately. Looking forward

for

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a reply from your side Sincerely, Liza

gk18823

Jan 4, 2026

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coherence

Try to break the letter into clear parts. Have one idea in each paragraph: why you want to join, then what you ask.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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library
book
read
study
city
new
move
join
member
membership
card
fee
price
cost
hours
open
close
weekend
holiday
online
e-book
audiobook
database
resource
room
study room
quiet
access
contact
email
phone
please
thank you
kind regards
sincerely
manager
dear
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You recently moved to a new city and want to join a public library. Write a letter to the library manager. In your letter: explain why you want to join the library ask about membership fees and opening hours inquire whether the library provides online resources or study rooms

Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for​ sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

people say that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see artwork and historical objects by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, the average weight of children is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes of these problems? What measures could be taken to solve them?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the popluation in the countryside is decreasing.

Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.