Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include: 1) What the gift is 2) Why you chose it 3) How it will be delivered.

Dear Tom, I hope you are feeling well. I am happy to

heard

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hear

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that you

are

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have

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just moved to a new house. I know that was your

family

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family's

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plan

long

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a long

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time ago to get a new house.

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this

Linking Words

occasion, I want to tell you that

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have bought a

gift

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for you to celebrate

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your

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new house. The

gifs

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is a music poster. I prefer

this

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gift

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because you like music so much

especially

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, especially

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rock music.

This

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poster is

limited

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a limited

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edition

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that

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seller said to me. I hope you like it and put

into

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it into

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your cosy room. I have bought

this

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gift

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from the website. It will be delivered between 3 to 5 days on

the

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apply

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weekdays. You do not have to worry about the delivery cost because it is free. I do

apologize

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can not bring your

gift

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by myself because I am still

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out of town for

job

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a job

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. I hope you love the

gift

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and let me know if you want

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apply

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poster

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posters

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thank

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Thank

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you

tom

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apply

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see

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See

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you soon Jami

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Jan 4, 2026

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grammar

Correct 'heard' to 'hear' and 'have moved' for the right meaning.

grammar

Use 'gift' not 'gifs'.

structure

Put ideas in two or three small parts instead of one long block.

content

Keep the same idea in each part. Include the gift, why you chose it, and how it will come to them.

tone

Close with a warm sign-off like 'Best wishes, Jami'.

content

You tell what the gift is.

content

You say why you chose it.

structure

You give when and how it will come.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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