The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countried in the same period.

The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countried in the same period.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countried in the same period.
The
first
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chart illustrates the population in England and Wales every 100 years from 1700 to 2000,
while
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the second shows the rates of
birth
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and
death
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in those countries, counted per 1000
people
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. The units are measured in millions for the
first
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chart.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the populations of these 2 countries increased significantly, and the
birth
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&
death
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rates had a similar increment, even though only for the
first
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period.
However
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, if compared, more
people
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were born than died in every period. In 1700, there were fewer than 10 million
people
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registered as UK citizens. In the next 100 years, the population rose moderately twice, before rising exponentially to almost 40 million. In the final count, there were almost 50 million
people
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living in England and Wales. In terms of
people
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who were born and died in the UK, at
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first
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, there were around 10 per 1000 births in the UK,
while
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the
death
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rate
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was below the
birth
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rate
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.
Then
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in the next period, both of them had an exponential increase, to more than 20 and 15, respectively. After that, until 2000, the
Birth
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and
death
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rates experienced a significant fall. The
birth
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rate
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was more than 10,
whereas
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the
death
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rate
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was exactly 5, making it the lowest in all periods.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words first, birth, death, people, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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