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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

These days, people do check the history of the
house
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 they want to buy. There are many for
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 trend , like for security,safety and more. I will discuss these reasons in the following paragraphs with possible ways to conduct
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 research. First of all, people are concerned about their security. And doing proper research on new houses built gives you a kind of surety regarding safety. To explain
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, the use of inferior quality building raw materials could be used by a broker to save money.
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 as low-quality door panels, windows , etc.
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, doing an audit before buying any new
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 helps you to decide on the basis of your requirements.
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, most Indian clients prefer black marble in the kitchen
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 of white because of the type of food they cook. There are many ways to check the new
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. Like customer can check the
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 in person by scheduling a meeting with the dealer.
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, there are many new websites and mobile apps that provide a virtual tour of the land with all details and features. Another way to verify the new land is through the government website. These websites make sure people get the perfectly built or properly renovated
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 with superior quality.
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, in the UK, all broker has to get clarification from the local authority before putting a listing for any new or old
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. In conclusion, physical inspection before buying any
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 or
property
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 is a good idea because it's a huge one-time investment and for own betterment and safety.

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improvement
Fix the small errors in words and space. Link ideas with easy join words like and, also, then. Use one main idea in one or two sentences.
advice
Give more clear steps on how to study the history of a house. List steps in order.
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Keep facts simple and on topic. Avoid extra lines that do not help the point.
strength
The goal and plan are clear.
strength
Intro, body, and conclusion are used.
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Some good examples are used to show the idea.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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