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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad overweighs the disadvantages?

Studying is the most crucial thing in the earlier life
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 now, so there are several learners
go
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who go
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 to other countries to
study
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.
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 it is a commonly held belief that studying overseas is
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benefical
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beneficial
 to students, there is
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 an argument that
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 studying abroad
is
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has
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negative
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a negative
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 side.
This
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 essay will analyse
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 topic from up
sides
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 and drawbacks and express my point of view. On one hand, studying in
foreign
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a foreign
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 country is beneficial to
studens
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students
. To exemplify, most
of
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learners who go to
study
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 abroad
they
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apply
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learn new things and new
culturs
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cultures
, which
is
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are
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 positive things, which
is
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may help them in
there
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their
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 practical life.
On the other hand
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, some people think that studying
overseaes
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overseas
 is down
aspects
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disadvantage
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. It is
also
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 possible to say that
,
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 students who
study
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 abroad may feel they are
isolation
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isolated
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 during
there
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their
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 learning
joureny
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journey
. There is a
study
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that provids
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provids
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provides
 data about the
studens
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students
 who
study
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 away, 90% of them are
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.
Finally
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, it is difficult to give
right
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 answer about
this
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 essential case. In my opinion, I think that the
up sides
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upsides
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 of studying away from your family
is overweighs
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outweigh
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 the
down sides
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downsides
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.

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language
Fix big errors in grammar and spell. Use short, clear sentences so the sense is easy.
structure
Make a plan before you write. Say what you will write, then write it. Give two main ideas and a small example for each.
coherence
Link ideas with small words like first, also, but, however to move from one idea to the next.
task
End with a clear view. Rest your main idea in the last line.
language
Check the words you use a lot. Try to use simple common words from the top 100 word list.
content
The topic is good and you try to show both sides.
structure
The essay has a clear plan with intro, two body parts and a conclusion.
content
There is a clear view given on the topic.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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