Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future society while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.

Some

individuals

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believe that

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machines

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such

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, such

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robots

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robots,

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will be a part of

society

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society,

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while

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others argue that machines will be a risk for future society.

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, I strongly disagree with

given

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the given

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statement because I believe

robots

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will make human life

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apply

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easier and safer.

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with, people made

considerable

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a considerable

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amount

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number

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of AI products and machines during

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last

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the last

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dacade

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decade

and

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, and

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it makes human life

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apply

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easier than before.

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this

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these

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tools

helps

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help

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for medical industry and Education as well. Nowadays, some developed nations use

robats

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robots

for hotels,maintain roads, for hospitals

also

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the

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for the

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military.

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, there will be

significant

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a significant

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amount

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number

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robots

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all around the world in future.

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, these

robots

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already

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are already

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helping for army.

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for

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example, drones are widely used by Russian forces. These

robots

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helping

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are helping

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to save humans and

helps

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help

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to clean roads and maintain hotels

and

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they

even

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are even

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use

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used

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for risky jobs by now.

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, some

individuals

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argue that

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apply

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giving power to

robots

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will be

end

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the end

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of the world.

when

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its

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comes to

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robots

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improve their skills using

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chips and will be able to think

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also

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and also

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act as real human

being

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beings

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. Some major countries

trying

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are trying

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to develop better

robots

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for the military

and

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, and

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they will have knowledge for access

whatever

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to whatever

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the

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they

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need through the internet.

despite

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apply

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developing these

robots

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what

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, what

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apply

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one day they will

against

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turn against

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humans

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This

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question remains

scilence

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silent

. In

conclution

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conclusion

, some

individuals

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see the

bight

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side of developing

robots

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and

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, and

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there are various

rang

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ranges

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of benefits that we can take from

them

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them,

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while

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apply

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other

individuals

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point out the main problem

developing

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with developing

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robots

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my way of

thinking

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thinking,

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we still can control them

and

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, and

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still we

cant

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can't

see a risk from

robots

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. Moreover

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moreover

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, we are the

creator

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creators

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robots

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and

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, and

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we can turn

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them of

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off

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whenever we want

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. So

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apply

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long as we

has

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the kill switch, we

dont

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don't

need to worry about

this

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matter.

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Jan 6, 2026

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structure

Plan your work before you write. List the order: intro with your view, then discuss each side, then a short conclusion with your view.

coherence

Use clear links to show how ideas go together. Use words like First, Also, But, However, In addition.

grammar

Fix grammar and word use. Check spellings (e.g., 'decade', 'robot', 'easier'), and use simple, clear sentences.

content

Give more full proof for your points. Add clear reasons and small examples for each idea.

tone

Keep a calm tone and a fair look at both sides before you give your view.

task response

You show both sides and give your own view.

coherence

You use real life examples, like drones in war, and talk about robots in different places.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

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Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

317 words

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quality
life
jobs
fields
design
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