Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Global environmental issues have been a popular topic in the
last
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few decades, and some people contend that increasing the
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of fuel is the best solution to tackle
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problem.
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, disagree with
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notion because there are other ways to reduce the effects of the global environmental problems.
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with, the
use
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of fossil
fuels
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is condemned as the major contributor to the environmental problems, mainly pollution and global warming. In big cities around the world,
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as New Delhi, Jakarta, and Mexico City, air quality has deteriorated that leading to various diseases
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as asthma, cough, and cancer
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the increase of usage of private vehicles using fuel. Meanwhile,
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the research of the Jakarta Post in 2022, showed that the ozone layer has been getting depleted in the
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few years because of greenhouse emissions from fossil
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, and
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, the average air temperature on Earth has risen approximately 10° C, which leads to detrimental effects
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weather changes.
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, scientists and environmental activists have a notion that raising the
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of gasoline and petrol will effectively combat
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issue.
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, it will cause inflation, which means raising the
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of staple crops and other daily needs.
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, the increased
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of fossil
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in Indonesia in 2017 led to 6% in inflation,
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reducing the purchasing power
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meanwhile, the salary only went up by 3%. The best viable solution to tackle
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problem is to encourage societies to
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public transportation and impose a high tax on new cars from the dealers, because by doing so, citizens will reduce the
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of private cars , which leads to a reduction in emissions from fossil
fuels
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. In conclusion, raising the
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of fossil
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will have adverse effects on society , which leads to inflation
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thus
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, the most effective way is to induce societies to
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public transportation and enact high taxes on new vehicles to reduce gas emissions.

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task response
State your view clearly in the first line of the intro and keep it in all the body paragraphs.
coherence
Link ideas with small, easy words like also, but, and then to show how ideas go together.
coherence
Give a few easy examples that fit your view and stay true to your claim.
grammar
Check spelling and small grammar rules. Use full stops well and end each sentence clearly.
task response
Clear stand against the price rise and offer other ways to cut pollution.
coherence
Some real places and data are used to back points.
structure
Intro and conclusion exist and there is flow.
Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • emissions
  • alternative energy
  • conservation
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy technologies
  • affordability
  • collective action
  • innovation in energy efficiency
  • global cooperation
  • environmental measures
  • pollution
  • economic disparity
  • revenue
  • sustainable development
  • environmental sustainability
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