Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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that the

extinction

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of some plants and

animals

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is the primary environmental

problem

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.

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, I contend that global warming in the

last

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few decades is

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more important

issues

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issue

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.

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essay will discuss my views

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on

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this

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environmental

problem

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.

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with,

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scientist

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scientists

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, the loss of some plants and

animals

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is a critical topic

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need

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needs

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to be addressed immediately. The

primarily

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cause of

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phenomenon

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from

deforestation

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due to

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a high demand for housing, chairs, and tables increases the materials needed to meet the production of

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this

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these

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products. The massive

deforestation

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for many years has caused the

lost

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loss

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of habitats for

animals

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and biodiversity, and eventually contributed to their

extinction

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.

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, the

extinction

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of

Javanese

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the Javanese

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Tiger in 1940

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caused by excessive

deforestation

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for hundreds of years for farming and housing. The exploitation of

forest

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forests

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still

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prevalent in developing countries, including Indonesia. In

this

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country, the number of trees lost

due to

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forestation

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deforestation

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approximately

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0,6% annually.

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,

deforestation

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also

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leads to another serious environmental

problem

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, namely global warming.

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science, trees in the forest have a function to absorb carbon dioxide, and removing trees that absorb these substances means releasing stored carbon from biomass and soil when forests are cleared or burned, contributing substantially, around 10-20%, to global emissions and exacerbating climate change.

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, the consumption of private cars using fossil fuels

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produce

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greenhouse gas emissions into the atmosphere, and leads to the acceleration of global warming and climate change as well. In conclusion, the

extinction

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of

animals

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and plants is as serious as

global

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the global

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warming

problem

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, and societies need to reduce

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apply

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deforestation

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and fossil

fuels

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fuel

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vehicles to mitigate its detrimental effects.