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The chart below shows the changes in the percentages of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The provided bar graph compares changes in the ownership of cars in one of the European countries from 1971 to 2001.
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, the rate of individuals who possessed vehicles declined over the period,
whereas
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 the proportions of
the
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one car
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two
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cars
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households
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 rose with fluctuations. Starting with no car,
initially
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, its share was the highest, accounting for about 50%.
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, after a
decade
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 it decreased and represented just over 40%.
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 figure experienced a continual fall, constituting 20% in 1981 and stayed unchanged in the final year. Turning to the indications of one car, in 1971 it constituted roughly 35%,
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 in 1981 it continued falling, making up approximately 32%.Yet in the next
decade
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 the share witnessed a significant
ascend
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, highlighting the highest percentage( about 52%).
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 the indication saw a decline, accounting for 45%, it retained its dominance. Focusing on the rates of two cars, at the start of the
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 it depicted the lowest share, with around 15%.
Suprisingly
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Surprisingly
, it grew and made up 30%. After experiencing a recovery in the final year, it dropped to 21% in 1991.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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