Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that the best way to improve the health of the population is to

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of places

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where sports can be

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. Others say that the expected effect of that would be minimal, and other strategies should be implemented.

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facilities would be used, and

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on obesity

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and global healthcare would be far greater than any other measure. On the one hand, it is not because you increase the

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facilities that you automatically improve the health system.

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is because most people are not motivated to go to the gym because they are already tired

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of the day, and prefer to watch a movie.

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, there are already plenty of

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centres and the

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of people with obesity is still increasing.

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, in the USA, people prefer to take medications in order to lose weight rather than going to the gym. In my opinion,

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is not the solution because those medications are far more expensive than just doing exercise

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it will not be cost-effective.

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activities are the best way to lose weight and reduce the burden of obesity worldwide.

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to say that only a small amount of time doing

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is effective

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cardiovascular disease

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weight reduction and blood pressure lowering.

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, the latest guidelines in cardiology recommend running three times a week to improve our cardiovascular system. Even though we don’t know the real impact of increasing the

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facilities, I believe that it will have a huge role on the grounds that it will affect a larger population. In conclusion,

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having more places to practice

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is not a guarantee to improve our healthcare system, I believe

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is the greatest way to have the largest impact on it