The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

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number

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of people who went

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overseas

travel

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between 1900 to 2005.

Overall

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The

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total

number

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internationel

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international

travel gradually increased and reached

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693.7 million in 2005.

Europe

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European

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citizines

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citizens

were

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traveled

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people over the period of time,

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however

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People from Asia and

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the pacific

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pacific

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region significantly

incresed

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increased

their

oversese

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overseas

travel

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while

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Amarica

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America

shows low growth.

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east

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maintain

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steady growth

and

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they

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reached 15.8 million

internationel

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international

travelers

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travellers

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in 2005.

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lowest

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saws

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the middle

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middle east

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Middle East

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while

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the higest

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higest

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highest

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travles

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travels

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europe

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Europe

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Jan 9, 2026

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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89 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

significant increase
international travel
popular destinations
economic growth
technological advancements
ease of travel
cultural exchange
globalization
fluctuations
trend
millions of travelers
annual growth rate

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Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age and live in a city. Why do you think they move to cities? Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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