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More and more people prefer to read e-book rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries?

Today,
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 the development of technology,
people
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 tend to read
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e-book
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e-books
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instead
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 of
paper
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books
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, which is becoming a
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 topic.
While
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 reading
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e-book
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e-books
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 rather than
paper
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books
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 does have certain advantages, it would
also
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 bring up some following issues.
This
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phenomenon and
 specifically
analize
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analyse
 the problems that can
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 place
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libraries
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. First and foremost, compared with
paper
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books
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,
e-book
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 possesses considerable convenience for us.
Instead
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 of carrying a heavy physical book with
tones
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tons
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 of pages outside, a light
kindle
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Kindle
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 can solve the problem at ease.
Moreover
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, readers are capable of reading
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e-book
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an e-book
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 in almost any circumstances,
while
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paper
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books
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has
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have
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 many
restrctions
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restrictions
,
such
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 as
at
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 a completely dark environment and
at
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 some places near water or fire. Another significant reason is the
aboundant
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abundant
 database of
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e-book
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e-books
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. When some readers have to search for a book in a
book store
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bookstore
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 or a library, others already find their
prefered
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preferred
books
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 online through
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e-book
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e-books
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 and read
it
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them
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 instantly.
Hence
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,
libraries
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 would
apperently
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apparently
 encounter
some
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apply
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certain problems. The
e-book
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's
accessibilty
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accessibility
 to numbers materials makes
people
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 show up less in
libraries
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.
Consequently
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,
paper
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books
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 in
libraries
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 become more like a decoration
rathan
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rather
 than something that
people
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 want to read. If
this
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 became an ongoing trend, there would be an
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siginifacnt
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significant
 decrease
of
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in
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 the existing
libraries
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.
Last
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 but not least,
libraries
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 may become a place where
people
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 go to study and hold some ceremonies, where there is no
astmosphere
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atmosphere
 for
people
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reading
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to read
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 at all. In conclusion, the reasons for
people
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 reading
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e-book
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e-books
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 rather than
paper
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books
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 are the convenience and the
accessibilty
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accessibility
 of a big database, which can cause
libraies
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libraries
become
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to become
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 a place where no one wants to read and show up.

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task response
Explain the task more. Give a clear plan before you write and keep to this plan.
coherence cohesion
Put one main idea in each paragraph. Use simple linking phrases to move from idea to idea.
intro conclusion
Make a strong intro that shows your view and a short conclusion that restates it.
main points
Give full details for each idea and add an easy example to back it up.
content
Check that you answer all parts of the task. State why people read e-books and how libraries may change.
structure
There is a clear start, body, and end in the essay.
language
Some links and simple ideas are used.
content
The writer tries to deal with both sides of the topic.
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