Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today . Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be threat to life on earth . Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a big debate about the

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of genetic engineering in

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modern life

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some would argue that

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will enhance our

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in many ways,

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others claim that we should be concerned and we have to limit its

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. I partly agree with these voices

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advocate the crucial

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that

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science

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plays in our

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nowadays.

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, we should admit that

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has interfered in our

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now more than

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before

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, genetic engineering is not an exception.

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the help of

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science

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we can overcome many obstacles that we could not

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resist

before

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, we can have some control over the gene system of our bodies.

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,

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helped us to identify countless numbers of

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unknown

illness and their causes and find the proper medication for them.

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, scientists could

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develop

active vaccines against many serious types of flu viruses

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many

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before.

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the other hand, some religious groups have a different point of view

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they are totally against the

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of genetic engineering in our

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.

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, if we can determine the gender of children before

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birth, it would be considered a sin

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human

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could make

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the help of genetic engineering

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, it may harm the demographics of some societies

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. Some Eastern

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societies prefer boys over girls

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cultrual

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cultural

and

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traditional

reasons. In conclusion,

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type of

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has improved our

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and

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our responsibility is to use

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in the proper way

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will help us and match with the

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instructions

and

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considerations.