The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart presents data on percentages of harmful nutrients,which

people

Use synonyms

in the USA consume, illustrating how proportions are distributed among

sodium

Use synonyms

, saturated fat, and added

sugar

Use synonyms

in every meal of

Correct article usage

the

show examples

day.

Overall

Linking Words

, dinner constituted the biggest

Fix the agreement mistake

show examples

, where

sodium

Use synonyms

and saturated fat are consumed heavily. Snacks represented only a minor proportion

for

Change preposition

show examples

sodium

Use synonyms

and saturated fat,

while

Linking Words

it is the main meal in which

people

Use synonyms

consume added

sugar

Use synonyms

at around42%. In detail, dinner is the major meal, where

people

Use synonyms

eat

sodium

Use synonyms

at around 43% and saturated fat at around 37%.

In addition

Linking Words

sodium

Use synonyms

the

Correct article usage

show examples

nutrient

Punctuation problem

apply

show examples

which

are

Correct subject-verb agreement

show examples

consumed

Change preposition

show examples

the same proportion during breakfast and snacks.

Linking Words

However

Add a comma

However,

show examples

these are the

time

Fix the agreement mistake

times

show examples

Punctuation problem

apply

show examples

when

people

Use synonyms

use saturated fat slightly more at around 16% and 21%, respectively.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, dinner is the following major share for added

sugar

Use synonyms

at around 23%.

Moreover

Linking Words

, approximately a double in

decrase

Correct your spelling

decrease

is observed in the percentage of added

sugar

Use synonyms

in lunch at

aroun

Correct your spelling

around

19%.

narminmuradliofficial

Jan 10, 2026

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words people, sodium, sugar with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

160 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, * say where you think you left the papers * explain why they are so important * tell the manager what you want him/her to do
I am writing this letter to inform you that I left some important papers at the hotel after attending a meeting.
7.5
band
Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, there has been a growing debate on whether adults need to attend formal classes to pursue further education or if self-study can be an effective alternative. While self-study offers flexibility and the ability to tailor learning to individual needs, I believe that formal education in a classroom setting provides essential structure, interaction, and resources that are difficult to replicate through self-study alone.
7
band
You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employer agency. In your letter: Introduce Yourself Explain what sort of job you would like Say what experiance and skills you have
I am writing to express my interest in any part-time job at your organisation. I am Alishan Ali, a graduate student at Dalhousie University, completing my final year in a Master's in Applied Computer Science.
6
band
Write a letter to a hotel manager about booking a private room for family party. Explaining What kind of party is it? What do you need in the room? And ask for food and prices?
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to enquire about the possibility of booking a private room at your esteemed hotel for a family party.
8
band
Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest taxpayers' money in healthcare, while others believe that money should be used in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
People currently are appealing to the governments that the proportion of healthcare expenses should be increased. In my view, this proposal is plausible and deserves more practical support as the fitness of citizens is a cornerstone of nations.

Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employer agency. In your letter: Introduce Yourself Explain what sort of job you would like Say what experiance and skills you have

Write a letter to a hotel manager about booking a private room for family party. Explaining What kind of party is it? What do you need in the room? And ask for food and prices?

Nowadays, people believe that governments should invest taxpayers' money in healthcare, while others believe that money should be used in other areas. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.