The increasing levels of air pollution in urban areas are having a detrimental impact on public health. What are the main causes of this pollution and what solutions can be implemented to address this issue?

Increased levels of

air

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pollution in major cities

has

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have

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impacted the well-being and health of our

cummunity

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community

. Causes include

greenhouse

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gasses

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gases

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and deforestation

and

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, and

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there are several ways we can tackle and mitigate the detrimental effects of

them

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these

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. One cause of increased

air

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pollution in the atmosphere is deforestation

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deforestastion

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Deforestation

is when

trees

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are forcefully cut down for the gain of humans,

for example

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, houses,

building

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buildings

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and so on

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. This

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this

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is frankly destructive for the ecosystems that live in those specific areas. When

trees

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are cut down, Co2 (Carbon dioxide) is released from its own roots, which

then

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emerges out and pollutes the

air

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even more, and tress in their normal behaviour absorb Co2 from the

air

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and

release

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oxygen through photosynthesis,

therefore

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cutting them down decreases the amount of oxygen released into the world and

consequently

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massively raises Co2, one solution is that we plant more

trees

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in the world and make new rules on when cutting

trees

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is allowed and when it is not.

Simlilarly

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Similarly

, fossil fuels have a direct impact on climate change and

air

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pollution

, fossil

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. Fossil

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fuels are unrenewable

energy

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sources

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that

release

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greenhouse

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gases into the

air

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when they are burned for the gain of

energy

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, these

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. These

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include coal, oil,

natural

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and natural

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gas

which

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, which

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release

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humongous loads of

greenhouse

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gases. One way we can mitigate and reduce the emissions of these gases is through renewable

energy

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sources

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such

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as solar

panals

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panels

, wind turbines and biomass. Renewable

energy

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sources

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are

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energy producing

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energy-producing

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systems that work without needing to

release

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apply

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greenhouse

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gas

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gases

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through

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apply

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chemical

reaction

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reactions

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;

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they are infinite and

are

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apply

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eternal. In conclusion,

defroeststaion

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deforestation

and the burning of fossil fuels have a direct effect on climate change and the well-being of our

cummunities

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communities

and

enviroment

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environment

, there

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. There

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are solutions

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such

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, such

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the

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apply

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banning or even decreasing

deforestsation

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deforestation

and limiting fossil fuel use and relying on renewable

energy

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sources

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will

majorly

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greatly

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enrich

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improve

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our health and our

own

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apply

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planet.

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planning

Plan your writing first. Start with a short intro that says what you talk about. Then give two or three clear points in order.

accuracy

Be exact with facts. Trees take in CO2 and make oxygen by photosynthesis. Do not say roots release CO2.

language

Fix spell and word use. Use the right word and spell well.

coherence

Link ideas with small words like also, but, then, so, for example.

structure

End with a short conclusion that restates the main idea.

idea

You chose two good causes: forests and fossil fuel use.

idea

You give ideas to help: plant trees and use solar and wind power.

style

You use some clear words to explain.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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