The maps below show the changes in the art gallery's ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.

The maps provide information on what alterations were made to the ground floor of the art
gallery
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between 2005 and the present.
Overall
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, the
gallery
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was significantly redeveloped, with major changes concentrated on the left-hand side,
while
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the
exhibition
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rooms on the right remained largely unchanged.
It is clear that
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nowadays the left-hand side of the
gallery
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floor has experienced the most noticeable changes. In 2005,
this
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area consisted of a cafe, a
gallery
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office and
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exhibition
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an exhibition
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room 4.
In contrast
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, these spaces have now been replaced by a
gallery
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shop, a vending machine, a temporary
exhibition
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area and a children’s area, none of which existed in the past. In comparison, the right-hand side of the floor with its three
exhibition
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rooms has been retained unchanged.
The access
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to the building has
also
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been improved.
Although
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the main entrance hasn’t changed its location, people with disabilities can now use a new ramp for wheelchairs
as well as
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a new lift that has been installed right next to the stairs. The reception desk remains centrally located within the entrance hall.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gallery, exhibition with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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