The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.

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pie chart illustrates the use of AED 315

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funds by the UAE government in 2000.

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, the biggest investment made during the target year went to Social Security

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while

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the Transport received the lowest amount. Social security peaked in the ranking with major funds allocations of AED 100

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, followed by Health and personal social services at AED 53

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, twice less in

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comparison

. Education was the third priority area, receiving AED 38

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, followed by AED 23

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each spent for Debt interest and Other expenses categories,

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Defence

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a comparable amount of AED 22

billions

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. Not more than 17

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subsidize

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the sector of Law and order. The least

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sectors were Housing the Heritage

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Environment with AED 15

billion

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expenditures; followed by

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Industry, Agriculture and Employment with a modest allocation of AED 13

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Transportation

spendings

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received the minimum support of only AED 9

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Jan 12, 2026

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The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some cities create new housing for thier growing population by constructing a samller number of high-rise buildings.Other cities create more of Low-rise buildings whcih solution is better in your opinion.

write a referral letter to a gastroenterologist.