Some people think that zoos are cruel and have no place in the modern world. Others feel that zoos still serve a useful purpose. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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zoos in the modern world. Some people believe that zoos are vile and should be abolished,

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others still opine that they have a purpose. I am in support of the latter.

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essay, I will discuss both views. On the one hand, it is imperative to note the negative effects the

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has on these creatures.

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,

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are kept in a confined space;

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, a cheetah, which is part of the wild cat family, needs a large area for proper exercise , but it can be seen to be enclosed in a tight corner in the

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for amusement. More so, these

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are solely dependent on

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for survival, in the sense that

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get to feed them every day, and without

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, they can not survive on their own in the wild because these

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, especially the canivores, have no hunting experience

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, they may become a target to other predators.

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can serve an educational purpose for children. Research studies conducted on children concluded that kids learn more about different

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by going on an expedition to the

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, they get to identify different species of

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, and in some cases, they would like to own some domestic

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as dogs

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or cats as house pets.

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, the

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protects the

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that are on the brink of extinction. As an illustration, the Blue Mackaws, a rare species of parrots, have been saved from extinction

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the conservation of these birds in the

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. In the absence of these measures taken by zookeepers, so many other

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would not exist in

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modern time. Progressively, the

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provides employment opportunities for citizens in the community as they get hired to cater to the needs of these

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, the

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may have its drawbacks, but

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am of the opinion that the

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does more good

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the safety of these

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and maintains a balanced ecosystem between

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and

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