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Writing Samples
Band 2

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore, every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Introduction
The first reason is
when
Correct word choice
that when
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 we have a
water
Use synonyms
 supply in the
house
Punctuation problem
house,
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 it
help
Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
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 us to have
a
Correct article usage
apply
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clean
water
Use synonyms
.
According to
Linking Words
research
Punctuation problem
research,
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 70% of people who have a good supply
Use synonyms
water
Change preposition
of water
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they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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are
more healther
Correct word choice
healthier
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and
Punctuation problem
, and
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 they have
a
Correct article usage
apply
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strong
Replace the word
stronger
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 hair.
As a result
Linking Words
,
must
Use the right word
most
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of
Change preposition
apply
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people who use
a
Correct article usage
apply
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clean
water
Use synonyms
 in
them
Correct pronoun usage
their
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 daily life
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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have a
healther
Correct your spelling
healthier
 physical body.
Body paragraph 1
Another important advantage is
families
Correct word choice
that families
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 who have a good
water
Use synonyms
 supply
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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will save money.
For example
Linking Words
,when they got a good
water
Use synonyms
 supply
on
Change preposition
for
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 the first
time
Punctuation problem
time,
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 they will not need to buy
a
Correct article usage
apply
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bottels
Correct your spelling
bottles
 of
water
Use synonyms
 from the supermarket, because they will use the home supply.
Conclusion
Increases
Wrong verb form
Increasing
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 knowledge of
water
Use synonyms
 supply
help
Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
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 others to be
envermentlist
Correct your spelling
environmentalists
 is another benefit.
For
Linking Words
instance
Add a comma
instance,
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 we will
readuseing
Correct your spelling
reuse
 the
waist
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waste
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 and help the
recycl
Correct your spelling
recycling
.
Acoording
Correct your spelling
According
 to
Correct article usage
a servey
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servey
Correct your spelling
survey
, people who have
a supply
Check wording
access to clean
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water
Use synonyms
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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will
decreases
Wrong verb form
decrease
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use
Correct pronoun usage
their use
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 of
water
Use synonyms
bottes
Correct your spelling
bottles
,so they will be eco-friendly.

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task response
State a clear view about free water at the start.
coherence
Make a small plan: intro, 2 body parts, and a short end.
grammar
Use real facts and check spellings. Keep words simple.
coherence
Use simple link words to show order and ideas.
content
The essay talks about health and money and how water use can help the env.
support
It uses some examples, like bottles and a study.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • basic
  • human
  • right
  • water
  • supply
  • provided
  • free
  • charge
  • agree
  • disagree
  • health
  • essential
  • sick
  • diseases
  • supports
  • education
  • children
  • focus
  • learning
  • searching
  • better
  • futures
  • reduce
  • poverty
  • families
  • save
  • money
  • spend
  • important
  • needs
  • promote
  • equality
  • chance
  • access
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