The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June

The chart displays different methods used to request information in the United Kingdom from January to June.
Overall
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, it shows an upward trend unless letter or an email. In January, around 900 people used the telephone to request information, followed by letter/email and by person, with 750 and 450, respectively. Over the month, the usage of the telephone rose slowly until March,
while
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between March and April, the data remained stable at 1000.
Then
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, it began to increase significantly until it reached 1600 in June. Almost the same as the telephone’s trend, people who request from the tourist office in person have increased significantly. It reached the peak with 1900 in June, and became the highest number of all.
Conversely
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, it started to decrease slightly, but the data is still up to 600 people. After that, the data dropped from about 700 to 300 in the range of March to May. It is stable until the rest of the month and has
also
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become the lowest number compared to all methods.

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