The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration displays the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it is nowadays.

Overall

Linking Words

, the library has been transformed

completlly

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completely

. including the

addtion

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addition

of a space for storytelling events,

info

Correct article usage

an info

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desk with

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apply

show examples

self-service machines and a cafe. In the past, there was a place for

cds

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CDs

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, videos,

computer

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and computer

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games

but

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, but

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now it has been

extanded

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extended

to become a

spease

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space

for events with two

sofa

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sofas

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and

childrens

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children's

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fiction

books

Use synonyms

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. menwhile

show examples

Correct your spelling

Meanwhile

menwhile

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menwhile,

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the place for

the

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apply

show examples

childrens

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children's

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books

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has been

develped

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developed

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into

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a lecture room.

Also

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, they replaced the enquiry desk by adding a cafe. As for the reading

room

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room,

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it has been converted to a computer room.

In contrast

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, the area of the adult non-fiction

books

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has set up an information desk with

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apply

show examples

self-service machines and adult fiction

books

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However

Linking Words

, the tables & chairs in the middle

has

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have

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been removed totally

Punctuation problem

, so

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there is no place for them today.

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Jan 15, 2026

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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