The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie diagrams

illustrates

Correct subject-verb agreement

illustrate

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the amount of

maoney

Correct your spelling

money

that

spent

Verb problem

was spent

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and received in the USA for children's charity in 2016.

Overall

Linking Words

, it is

eveident

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evident

that the total expenditure is almost

eqaul

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equal

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that of the

income

Use synonyms

generated from various resources.

Furthermore

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majority

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the majority

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of money was collected from food

donation

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donations

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and

on the other hand

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goverment

Correct your spelling

government

grants and investment

income

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generated the smallest amount.

While

Linking Words

looking at the expenditure, it is evident that most of the money is

utilized

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utilised

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on program services. Looking at the revenue sources in 2016 for children's

charity

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charities

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in the USA, the highest proportion was generated from food

donation

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donations

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and

Punctuation problem

, and

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that is

Linking Words

86.6%. The

seccond

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second

major contribution was from food

dobation

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donation

and

Punctuation problem

, and

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that is

Linking Words

10.4%. All the other categories like program revenue, other

income

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goverment

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government

grant and investment

income

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contributes

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contribute

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a fraction less than 3%.

More over

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Moreover

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, investment

income

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and

govermant

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government

grant share the same percentage of 0.2

Linking Words

while

Punctuation problem

, while

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other

income

Use synonyms

closey

Correct your spelling

closely

follows it with 0.4%. Looking at the expenditures, more than 95% is used for program services.

Moreover

Linking Words

, the money allocated for fundraising and management and general was less than 3%.

All together

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Altogether

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it makes $ 53224896

which

Punctuation problem

, which

show examples

closely follows the

income

Use synonyms

generated from various resources.

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Jan 16, 2026

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is, while".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

201 words

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