The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)

Generall

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Generally

, the percentage of households with electronic

device

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devices

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have been increasing gradually from 1995 to 2015. Both Mobile Phone and Computer recorded a

surgein

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surge in

percentages. For tablet devices, it

does

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not appear in 1995

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however

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however,

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it emerged in

2000s

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the 2000s

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and greatly

increase

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increased

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its percentages starting from

mid-2000s

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the mid-2000s

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line chart
ownership percentages
electronic devices
20-year period
significant increases
significant decreases
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The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In some countries fees by paid by themselves but in some it is paid by themselves

The student who study from the school to university get benefit less and contribute less,than those of student who go to travel or job and get skills and experience brfore going high.Do you agree or disagree

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?