The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

The table depicts the

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of workers and industries manufacturing silk in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. What stands out is that the total

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of workers has

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divided by 3

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130.750 in 1851 to 38.942 in 1901. In parallel, the table shows that the proportion of males decreases tremendously from 53.964 in 1851 to 13.375 in 1901.

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, the female

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shows the same path

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surged from 76.786 in 1851 to 25.567 in 1901. Turning to another aspect related to

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, despite the

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of total employees decreasing sharply, the

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more than doubled at

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from 272 to 623

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the end of the period. It illustrates that the production of silk was increasing

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a tendency

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factories

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to reduce the

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number

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of

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workforce

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, the

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of total personnel has soared

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while

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the

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of

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had

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a huge rise over the period.