In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

In recent years, sustainable living
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required to reduce detrimental effects to our environment
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globalisation and
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rapid economic growth.
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sustainable living and the viable
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solutions
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to mitigate the impact of
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issue.
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with, the challenges to adopt a sustainable lifestyle stemming from consumerism around the world, which contributed to the most
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waste, namely plastic. These substances
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cannot
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decay or break down by natural
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for hundreds of years because
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nature as non-degradable compounds.
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, the
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of vehicles using fossil fuels
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greenhouse gas emissions into the atmosphere, and leads to the acceleration of global warming.
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, the
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of air quality caused by pollution has led to many illnesses, primarily cancer, asthma, and respiratory
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, in Jakarta, one of the most polluted cities in the world, the air pollution has contributed to the increase
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temperature by 0.5 °C in the
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ten years. To address
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this problem
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this
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problem, the government has a crucial role to encourage people to use
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products.
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, in many department stores, they provide paper
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bags
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which
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considered environmentally-friendly to reduce
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plastic usage.
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, educating societies to use public
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and subsidising electric cars is beneficial to reduce
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greenhouse gas
emission
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emissions
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,
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decelerating
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global warming.
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, the government of China has built
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railway system and subsidised
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electric vehicles since
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the beginning of 2000, and
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policy
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able to reduce air pollution by approximately 5%. In conclusion, a sustainable lifestyle
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both the
government
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roles
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role
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and
societies
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society's
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awareness to use environmentally-friendly products. By taking
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this
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actions, I believe that Earth will be a better place for
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humans
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to live on.

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