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Some conversations are eosier to have in person, while other conversations are easier on the phone or by text messaging. Do you find this to be true? Why or why not? In what situations do you prefer one mode of communication over another? Give reasons to support your opinion.

Having some conversations in person
instead
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on
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of on
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 the phone or by text messaging can make a big difference. Everything will depend on the subject,
importance
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the importance
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 of the conversation and who you are going to talk with. The subject can be a daily conversation about something that you are going to do or are doing
besides
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 an emergency or things
based
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related
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on
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to
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 work.
Otherwise
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, it will
mather
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matter
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 who you will need to talk with.
If
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It
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 is a friend, family member or
a
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apply
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coworker. Basic communication can totally be done by Text messages
but
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, but
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 if you are in an emergency or work discussion
talking
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, talking
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in
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on
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 the phone will make the subjects
more clear
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clearer
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, understandable and
smooth
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smoother
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.
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Overall
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Overall,
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 phone calls are better because you can hear the tone of the person on the other side and have a better feeling and comprehension of the conversation.

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task response
Plan your work. Put one big idea in the intro. Say it in one line. Use one idea per paragraph in the body. End with a short finish.
coherence cohesion
Work on the link between sentences. Use clear signs like first, also, but, however to guide the reader.
coherence cohesion
Fix small mistakes. Check spell like mather, text, phone. Use than and then in the right way.
task response
Give one or two real example. This helps show your point.
strength
The idea that phone calls can show tone is clear.
strength
There is a sense of order in the writing.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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