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Most scientific and inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money resources. To what extend do you agree or disagree?give your own opinion

Most scientific inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money
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. And my opinion about
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 topic is complicated, that’s why. First of all, I want to say that lots of scientific discoveries were made randomly , so they cannot be part of
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, They did not spend money
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 waste time.
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, we talk about things which have been planned. So personally,
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 agree or disagree. The answer depends on what it is
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 discovery is useful. But still, I'm of the opinion that if it was planned and in conclusion successful, why should it be a waste of money and time? Like
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 example, is it a huge innovation like the internet
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 Which people use every day? Or is it just a something not valuable. It doesn’t matter because it finds actual application In conclusion, my answer to
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 question is more no than yes. It is a hard topic to answer because it has many nuances.

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planning
Plan first. State your view in one clear line, then give reasons.
structure
Make one idea in each paragraph and keep it simple.
content
Give a real reason and a clear example to back it up.
style
Use linking words like first, also, but, for example to show link of ideas.
focus
Check your work for grammar and keep to the topic.
content
You show a view on the topic, not just yes or no.
structure
You use the idea of internet as a big change, which shows some scope.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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