More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get their news and instead read online. Is this a positive or negative development?

The people now don't have time to check
about
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newspapers and watch
tv
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TV
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and
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the
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life it's
develop
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to know about the news. Had many positive and negative
about
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it. The news today
are
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faster to check in the
taqnlogy
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technology
When
i
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I
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want to
new
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know
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about
any thing
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just write to the phone or
iPads
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iPad
and
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, and
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I know faster
to read
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task
Say your view clearly at the start, then give 2 or 3 simple points to support it.
structure
Add a short intro and a short finish to your text.
language
Use short and simple words, check small spelling errors, and use simple sentences.
cohesion
Make one idea in each paragraph and connect ideas with simple words like and, but, also, for example.
idea
You show a point that news on a phone or tablet can be fast.
content
You write about the topic with real life tools (phone, iPad).
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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