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The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, with projections till 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the worldwide
population
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 in four nations from 1950 to 2000, with predictions till 2050. From an
overall
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 perspective,
India
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's
population
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 has been and is expected to rise substantially in the following years,
whereas
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 the reverse pattern could be seen in other countries. Notably, that of
India
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 accounted for the second position among the listed and is projected to gain dominance in the future. From the beginning, the
population
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 in China surpassed the remaining nations with around 26%, and continued to be dominant despite a fall of about 2 percentage points after 50 years.
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 was closely followed by figures for
India
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, with a record of about 15% and 19% in 1950 and 2000, respectively. The USA reported much lower proportions, which were at about one-tenth and 7&
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 the timeline. Meanwhile, Japan demonstrated the least prominence, with fewer than one-twentieth over time. Regarding the forecasts,
India
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 and China are expected to exhibit relatively similar outcomes, approximately 21% and 19%, with the former being higher. Predictions indicate a plateau in the USA,
while
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 by 2050, Japan will have its
population
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 halve by roughly 2 percentage points.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic shifts
  • population percentage
  • projection
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • laggard
  • steady state
  • global dynamics
  • economic implications
  • social implications
  • environmental implications
  • population trend
  • significant change
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