The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

This
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line graph compares the numbers of international
students
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in the UK
university
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universities
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from four regions
Asia
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: Asia
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,
Africa
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,
Euroupe
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Europe
and
Nourth
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North
America between 1995 to 2015.
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, as the graph shows
the
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, the
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majority of
students
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at
Uk
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UK
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university
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universities
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from
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are from
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Asia
which
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, which
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represents the most
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proportion
proporation
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proporation,
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while
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the minority
from
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are from
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Africa
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.
Morovere
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Moreover
, Asia is the only country with
noticeably
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a noticeably
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higher
poporation
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proportion
of pupils
studting
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studying
abroad.
looking
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at the data, the number of
students
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studying overseas in
Africa
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stay
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stayed
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steady from 1995 until
2000
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2000,
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then
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showing
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showed
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a slightly
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slightly
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slight
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decreas
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decrease
in 2005, after 2010 sharply
increases
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increased
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to nearly 65
students
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, comparing
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comparing
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compared
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with
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to
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Africa
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Africa,
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after
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where
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it was
increase
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increased
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to 30
students
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the figures fell to 20 in 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, africa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • go up
  • more
  • less
  • from
  • to
  • in
  • year
  • first
  • last
  • there
  • then
  • this
  • and
  • but
  • not
  • also
  • time
  • for
  • some
  • new
  • use
  • two
  • our
  • we
  • you
  • your
  • they
  • these
  • give
  • day
  • most
  • us
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