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Many companies are now replacing human workers with AI technology. What are the potential benefits and drawbacks of this trend? Is it ultimately positive or negative for society?

Nowadays, the AI technology
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 of
human
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im
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in
 many companies.
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, as usual of any new
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 there will be benefits and drawbacks. In the beginning, people were impressed by it and could not imagine the negative impact of using it for a long time.
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, there will be an effect on our society
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 positive or negative. There are many advantages and disadvantages of
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 trend.
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, the AI will complete the task faster than
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 human
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 that will increase the performance of the company. Reducing the number of employees will lower the cost, which will
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 a good impact on the
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.
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, one of the disadvantages,
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 will find
a
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difficulty in getting a job
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 of reliance on technology.
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, depending on artificial intelligence will make people lazy and will not be able to think about anything, just freeze their
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 main point is the positive effect on our community.
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 as, improving the efficiency at the national level will enhance the chance of
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 international rewards. Encouraging to learning more and know how to find the best way to
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 with
the
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artificial intelligence. Applying
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 innovation in the right place will make a miracle in different aspects of our lives. In conclusion, I believe replacing the workers
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 of making them
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 together is a bad idea. Because they can make a big change when
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the
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 amazing skills together, and we will never do anything without human capabilities.

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Task response
Make the intro clear with your view and plan.
Coherence
Use one idea per paragraph and give a simple example.
Coherence
Use linking words to join ideas and finish with a strong conclusion.
Grammar
Use short, easy words and check spelling.
Content
Add clear facts to back up points.
Structure
There is a start, a body and an end.
Content
Both good and bad sides are touched.
Task response
The view is given at the end.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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