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Learning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world. The teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Learning a foreign
language
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 offers an
insight
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 into how
people
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 from other
cultures
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 think and see the
world
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. The teaching of a foreign
language
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 should be compulsory at all primary
schools
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. To what
extent
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 do you agree or disagree with
this
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view
Use synonyms
 Learning a foreign
language
Use synonyms
 offers an
insight
Use synonyms
 into how
people
Use synonyms
 from other
cultures
Use synonyms
 think and see the
world
Use synonyms
. The teaching of a foreign
language
Use synonyms
 should be compulsory at all primary
schools
Use synonyms
. To what
extent
Use synonyms
 do you agree or disagree with
this
Linking Words
view
Use synonyms
 Learning a foreign
language
Use synonyms
 offers an
insight
Use synonyms
 into how
people
Use synonyms
 from other
cultures
Use synonyms
 think and see the
world
Use synonyms
. The teaching of a foreign
language
Use synonyms
 should be compulsory at all primary
schools
Use synonyms
. To what
extent
Use synonyms
 do you agree or disagree with
this
Linking Words
view
Use synonyms
 Learning a foreign
language
Use synonyms
 offers an
insight
Use synonyms
 into how
people
Use synonyms
 from other
cultures
Use synonyms
 think and see the
world
Use synonyms
. The teaching of a foreign
language
Use synonyms
 should be compulsory at all primary
schools
Use synonyms
. To what
extent
Use synonyms
 do you agree or disagree with
this
Linking Words
view
Use synonyms

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tip
Make your view clear in the first sentence. Say if you agree or not and how strong your view is.
strategy
Use a plan: intro, 2 or 3 body para, then a short conclusion. In each body, give one idea with a small example.
limitation
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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