In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
There are both great points and bad points
.soPunctuation problem
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not only
their town canCorrect word order
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keep
good Correct word choice
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and same scenery
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take away their freedom from them.
the man wanted to
builtWrong verb form
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a House with white
colorChange the spelling
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butPunctuation problem
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the city
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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a rule
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houseFix the agreement mistake
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onlyVerb problem
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only
braunFix capitalization
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.
soFix capitalization
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he can't
builtWrong verb form
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his house
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Plan your answer with a short intro, two sides, and a short ending.
Use simple grammar and spell words correctly.
Give one clear point for each side and give a real example.
Link ideas with simple words like and, but, also, so.
You show both sides of the issue.
You give an example to show your point.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general