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the table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1000 people in these countries in 2006.

Overall
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, all four countries experienced an increase in the
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 of temporary migrant workers between 2003 and 2006. The United States had the highest total
number
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 in both years,
while
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 New Zealand had the highest proportion of migrant workers per 1,000
people
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 in 2006. In 2003, the United States had the highest
number
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 of temporary
employers
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employees
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, with 577,000
people
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, and
this
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number
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 increased to 678,000 in 2006. The United Kingdom
also
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 showed a clear rise, going up from 137,000 to 266,000 during
this
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 period. Australia’s figures increased from 152,000 in 2003 to 219,000 in 2006. New Zealand saw a smaller growth, with numbers rising from 65,000 to 87,000. Regarding the
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 of employers per 1,000
people
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 in 2006, New Zealand had the highest figure at 21.1, followed by Australia with 10.7.
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, the United Kingdom and the United States had much lower numbers per 1,000
people
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, at 4.4 and 2.3
respectively
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, respectively
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Temporary migrant workers
  • Labor mobility
  • Statistical data
  • Insights
  • Trends
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Economic growth
  • Demand for labor
  • Immigration policies
  • Disparities
  • Concentration
  • Comparative analysis
  • Consequences
  • Economic impact
  • Cultural integration
  • Social services
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