Your are stayig at your friend’s house who is travelling to another country. A recent strom damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend and say What happened and when What was damaged in the house What needs to be done about it

Dear Raman How are you

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With a heavy heart, I'm writing

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letter to inform you about damage in the

house

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caused by a storm

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night , which was terrible.

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natural disaster happened yesterday at 7pm in the night.

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it had been warned by the weather forecasting department to stay inside but it was more dangerous than it had ever been thought through prediction.

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, it came before the actual

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which

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was mentioned by the department. During that

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, all of us were settled down to have dinner ,

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certainly I heard a dangerous roar outside

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shook the whole

house

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at the same

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. It was really an unexpected moment

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the extensive damage that occurred , which will cost thousands for the repair. The whole front side of the

house

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had been spoiled by

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, and the garage gate is not working more.

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,many cracks are seen on windows and doors. It was really a bad

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.I will suggest you send some money to recover these damages , and l will

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recommend you visit your

house

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as soon as. Don't be stressed and handle

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situation wisely. Hope to see you soon. Yours lovingly Harman

harmansandhu28461

Feb 1, 2026

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grammar/clarity

Be clear about time. Use 'last night around 7 p.m.' and avoid mixing day and night.

structure

Put the letter in clear parts: intro, what happened, what broke, what to do, and close.

content/tone

Use simple and exact words. Say what needs to be done with kind and polite tone.

grammar

Be steady with past and present tense.

content

Check the costs. You can say 'some money' but be calm and realistic.

tone

Close with a good sign off like 'Take care' or 'Yours truly'.

tone

The letter has a warm tone and a real voice.

content

The writer says what happened and what to do.

structure

There is a greeting and a sign off.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

207 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

severe weather conditions
structural integrity
mitigate
immediate steps
insurance claim
repair estimates
temporary fixes
contractors
coordination
overseeing repairs
valuables
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