The bar chart shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

The bar chart illustrates how much waste was gathered by a recycling centre during the years 2011 and 2015.

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, when paper

collection

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was dominant,

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while

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the garden gathering was dropped. In 2011, the paper was collected about 57 %, but

this

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was followed by a considerable drop to 40 % in 2013. Despite a considerable drop from 57 % to 40 % in two years, the

collection

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of paper increased notably to 70 % in 2015. The waste of glass

collection

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reduce

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slightly in 2012, but

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increased to 52 % in 2015. In 2011, the

tins

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was 35 %, but

this

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was followed by a

slightly

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drop, after which more

collected

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was collected

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further

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to 52 % in 2015. The waste

collection

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of

garden

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started at 31 % in 2011, but

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was followed by a

sharply rose

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to 15 %

i8n

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in

2012. In 2013,

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figure

inreased

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increased

slightly to 35 % in 2015.