Improve public parks and green speces. What do you think chances improvements? Informal write letter in your friend

Hi Monica, I hope you’re doing well. I recently received an email from the town Council

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it made me really happy because they asked for my opinion. I’m planning to suggest adding

plant

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apply

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more trees and flowers as these would be healthier options for everyone. It would

also

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be great if they could

organize

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organise

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build

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and build

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sports and playground facilities so that all members feel comfortable during busy hours. What do you think could be improved in the town Council? I’d love to hear your ideas. Lots of love, Maftuna Maftuna Narziyeva

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Feb 3, 2026

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grammar

Fix small word errors. Use 'more trees' and 'flowers' and 'town council' with small letters. Use 'build' or 'set up' for parks and plays.

structure

Put ideas in short, well filled parts. Start a new line or paragraph for a new idea.

task response

Say why the ideas help and how they will be used. This helps show you know the task.

tone

Keep the warm, friendly talk. It fits an email to a friend well.

cohesion

End with a question or a call to tell more, then a kind closing.

tone

Friendly tone and warm close.

content

Clear wish to help town with ideas.

reader-relations

Direct ask to hear friend's ideas.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

92 words

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