Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to information in many countries. This is danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Technology
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plays a vital role in life
and
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, and
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it
make
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makes
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human
being
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beings
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life
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lives
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convenient. There are many online
reaources
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resources
available to get
information
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about any country
at
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apply
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anwhere
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anywhere
. But
this
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out of control
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information
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access is dangerous for
society
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. I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin
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,
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there
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are tremendous
readons
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reasons
which show that
technology
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is really helpful to give us permission to collect
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about any country through online resources. First and foremost, it saves time and
convenient
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is convenient
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as well
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, as
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as
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and
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people
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can prepare themselves
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according to
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in
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that way.
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,
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the COVID-19 pandemic, it spread from
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countries to
india
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India
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,
people
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are
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learned
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about
this
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disease through
technology
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and
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, and
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they had already started
precautions
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taking precautions
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to protect
them
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themselves
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from these
cures
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diseases
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.
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, modern
technology
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really
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is really
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helpful and it provides
one
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apply
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information
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to every corner of the world.
On the other hand
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, there are many side effects of modern
technology
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, which put
society
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into
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in
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danger.
Firstly
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, fake
information
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creates
problem
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problems
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in
society
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because sometimes
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the situation
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is not big, but it
shows
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is
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like that way on
the
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social
media
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media,
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then
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people
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starts
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start
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argument
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arguing
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and
dispute
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disputing
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. That's why it
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creates
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problem
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a problem
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for
society
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.
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,
last
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summer in 2025,
people
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recieves
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received
flood
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floods
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in
india
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India
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,
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the punjab
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punjab
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Punjab
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state. So many
people
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lost their houses, animals, and food,
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condition was really bad
that
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at that
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time.
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, somebody post prime minister did not visit that location
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he did nothing for
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people
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the people
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who suffered in that situation.
After
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this
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post,
people
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starts
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argument
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arguing
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against PM and
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protested
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against him in front of his house.
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, fake news which
spread
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spreads
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through
technology
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creates a danger for
society
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. In conclusion, I strongly
disgree
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disagree
with
this
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statement, sometimes it
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fake news, but modern
technology
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provides
information
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about what is happening in the world and
also
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aware
the
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apply
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people
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about any bad news
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such
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, such
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as any disease or terrorism.

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Be clear what you think at once and stay with it. Do not switch view too much.
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You give real life examples like COVID and floods.
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