I You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

Dear Raman Hello! How are you

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Hope you're in radiant

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health. I'm writing

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letter to

apologize

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for the borrowed laptop of yours, which has been damaged since

last

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week. As

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you know that two weeks ago, I got a laptop from you to complete my presentation before

it's

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deadline. My brother took it from me for

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5 minutes to search

something

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for something

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internet

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and

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when he was about to give it back to me,

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then

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certainly it

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just fell down on the ground from his hands. Little

damages

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are

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being noticed

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one

right

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corner is broken and

little

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a little

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smash

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on the screen. I really feel guilty over

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. It

was

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happened because of my negligence. I would like to either repair

for

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this

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device or pay for the charges. Please let me know what

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you think is

better

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potion

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to do.

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, I

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contacted with cheapest repair shop, and they

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to do all at

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rates, rather than other shops Once

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I'm really sorry for

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damage. Yours lovingly Abc

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Feb 3, 2026

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grammar and style

Use clear, simple sentences. Try to keep one idea in each paragraph and one idea in each sentence.

grammar

Fix spelling and grammar: its deadline, five minutes, repair costs, option, paying, cheapest repair shop.

formatting

Use standard letter format: add a comma after the name in the greeting and close with a proper sign-off like Yours sincerely, then your name.

tone

Make the tone a bit warmer and more natural for a friend, and keep a calm tone when writing about mistakes.

content

The apology is clear and the writer shows care for the friend.

content

The writer explains what happened and how they plan to fix it.

form

There is a sign off at the end of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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