The circular charts illustrate five different categories of fuel used in America from 1980
upto
1990.
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to
Overall
, over a period of a decade in the USA, the main sources of energy were oil, natural gas, hydroelectric power Linking Words
as well
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as
nuclear power.
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and
To begin
with, oil was used mainly in both years of Linking Words
1980s
and 1990s, Correct article usage
the 1980s
this
was clearly shown in the graphs with 42% in 1980 and 33% in 1990, respectively.Meanwhile, Linking Words
this
was followed by the Linking Words
source
of natural gas with 26% and 25% over ten years.Use synonyms
Additionally
, hydroelectric Linking Words
was
not used very well because they only spent 5 per cent and remained the same from 1980 until 1990.
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power was
On the other hand
, coal drastically increased Linking Words
with
5% Change preposition
by
on
that periodChange preposition
during
,
the evidence is shown on the graph with 5 and 10 per cent in 1980 and 1990, respectively.To add on, the Americans Punctuation problem
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also
used coal as a Linking Words
source
of energyUse synonyms
,
in 1980, they used 22% and in Punctuation problem
;
1990
it was Punctuation problem
1990,
constantlly
increased to 27%.Correct your spelling
constantly
Finally
, people in the United States mainly use oil Linking Words
all
over Rephrase
apply
other any
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any other
source
of fuelUse synonyms
,
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;
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however
the least Add a comma
however,
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source
of energy that were used to Verb problem
used source
cook
and lighting is hydroelectric power.Replace the word
cooking