The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

The chart below shows the current health expenditure as a percentage of gross domestic product. It contains twelve European countries and their average outlay
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. Each country has three bars, for every year like 2002, 2007 and 2012.
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, there are some countries that made no change over the years from 2002 to 2012. Only France, the Netherlands, Denmark, Lithuania, Luxembourg, Norway, Poland and Slovenia had any changes in
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funding. All
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payments rose or sank about one to two
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percent
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of GDP.
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, France had about ten
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of GDP for
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in 2002, it rose to
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per cent in 2007, but
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was able to cut the cost to nine
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in 2012. You can find the lowest
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GDP
in Estonia by three
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. And the highest in Belgium and Switzerland
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ten to eleven
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of GDP. For Switzerland, the
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costs stayed the same over the decade. It would be quite interesting to compare the number of
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every country has to care for with the total health care costs. Unfortunately, that information is not shared in the diagram

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Vocabulary: Replace the words healthcare, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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