Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter •say which points in the article you agree with •explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. •offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

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letter to formally express my opinion on the

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that I have recently read in a national newspaper named The Tribune on 2nd February, concerning the similarity of

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centre

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accross

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across

the country. I was assured by the quality of journalism that the

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would be thought-provoking. I agree with your point that many cities have

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a similar

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look,

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long

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high street, many shops and a

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square.

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has not been the case for my

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because it

sists

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sits

by the river and has hills with an old church on top, giving

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view.

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distinction is vital for me because local identity is something our community takes great pride in. At present, I feel that your

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may have overlooked the historic and cultural diversity found in smaller regions like ours. Under the circumstances, I would like to formally invite the writer of the

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to visit my

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. I would be

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to provide a guided tour to showcase these differences firsthand. I look forward to your prompt response regarding

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matter. Yours faithfully, [Your Name]

kashyapkajal274

Feb 5, 2026

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grammar

Fix small spelling and word errors like accross and sists

structure

Try to put one idea in each paragraph; if a paragraph has two ideas, split it

content

Add two clear facts that show how your town is different

tone

Keep a formal and calm tone

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Polite and proper way to talk to the editor

content

Clear plan to show the town by tour

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Good link to local pride and culture

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Good opening and closing lines

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

187 words

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