The charts below give attendance figures for Grandville stadium from 2017 which are projected in 2030 after a major improvement project.

The bar chart gives information about the attendance figures for Grandville Stadium during the period from 2017 to the projected year 2030.

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the event types exhibited different trends over the given period, they all followed an upward trajectory.

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, the pace of growth varied, with some events showing a more rapid increase than others. As the chart shows, in 2017, the theatre attendance number stood at nearly 10,000, hitting the lowest point.

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, it continued to grow slowly , reaching around 15,000 in 2020, and is expected to grow drastically to slightly under 50,000 by 2030. The sporting events commenced at almost 150,000 in 2017 and rose gradually to more than 150,000 in 2020. It is predicted to maintain an upward trend, ending at its highest point by 2030.

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, the concerts began at approximately 25,000 in 2017, and increased moderately to just about 30,000 in 2020.

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, it climbed dramatically to slightly over 100,000

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of the period.

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The charts below give attendance figures for Grandville stadium from 2017 which are projected in 2030 after a major improvement project.

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